Peer Assesment

We were supposed to review Presentation A,B,C

Formation & Human Use of Fold Mountains

Peer Assessment

To help you produce your presentation on the ‘Formation & Human Use’ of your case study you must first mark three presentations done by learners from another school.

You need to look at each presentation carefully and give a mark from 1-5 (1= poor, 5 = excellent) according to the categories.  You must include a written comment on how to improve and be able to justify your reasons during class discussion.

Presentation A

Category	Score	How To Improve
Presentation of slides and quality of photographs, diagrams and writing.	2	Slides were messy and pictures overlapped information. Very few key terminology was used and too much extra information was included. How to improve ü Use more pictures and make the pictures clear and understandable. ü Use more key terminology ü Bullet point information, and only use key points. ü Keep slides tidy and organized to make information more presentable
The description and explanation of the formation of the Alps	2	Information was lacking, only the name and types of plates were described. Formation, features and processes were not included. Pictures were lacking How to improve ü Describe the formation, features and processes of the Alps ü Include pictures and diagram to aid with the learning process
The description and explanation of theme e.g. vegetation, HEP or Tourism	3	The species of vegetation and the climate of the alps were mentioned but human use was not mentioned. Information was over excessive and made presentation look dull and boring. How to improve ü Include human uses for the Alps. ü Cut down the information on the slides to just important points

Presentation B

	Score	How To Improve
Presentation of slides and quality of photographs, diagrams and writing.	3	Information was clear and understandable. More key terms have been used and information is summarized. Pictures are clear and understandable. Presentation was slightly boring with just black and white How to improve ü Introduce colour to the presentation to make the presentation look better
The description and explanation of the formation of the Alps	3	The formation and plates names and types were included. Formation and processes were there but not described in full detail. Pictures were clear but lacking How to improve ü Divide the formation into stages, it makes it easier ü Add more pictures for better understanding.
The description and explanation of theme e.g. vegetation, HEP or Tourism	1	Vegetation and human uses were totally not explained about. Pictures lacked and information was not entirely relevant. How to improve ü Explain and add pictures to explain plant species and human use ü Rewrite information on HEP and add more relevant pictures

Presentation C

Category	Score	How To Improve
Presentation of slides and quality of photographs, diagrams and writing.	2	Slides were OK, there was a good supply of photos but lacks information How to improve ü Add more information to slides ü Generally lacks information and needs to be revised
The description and explanation of the formation of the Alps	2	Pictures and animations are helpful but again lacks information needed. Processes, features and formations were not fully described. How to improve ü Add more information to the slides ü Include the formation, features and processes of the Alps ü Have a good balance of pictures and information
The description and explanation of theme e.g. vegetation, HEP or Tourism	1	No information whatsoever. Pictures don’t help in describing. How to improve ü Add information! ü Needs serious revision

To help with my presentation my group & I need to:

1) Ensure a well-balanced amount of pictures and information

2) Have understandable and clear pictures and diagrams

4) Include any processes, features and formation that may be relevant

5) Keep slides tidy and organized, to ensure easy understanding